You have an interesting style, I like it. What do you mean with "lace to the breeze" ? I couldn't translate it well, sry maybe my fault. But all in all good work!
If you have a writers block, I've a little hint or trick:
1. Think about a feeling you want to write about 2. Type the word you thing about now in the deviant art browser (maybe "sad" or "funny" or "angry") 3. Take the most beautiful or interesting picture you find and write about it (lyric or prose doesn't matter)
Thanks. "lace to the breeze" imagine delicate woven fabric as in lace curtains of an open window, moved by the breeze, but defining the breeze itself. The lace makes you notice the breeze as the breeze makes you notice the lace. One without the other isn't the beautiful thing that,together they become.