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Now this is real art from the heart!


The time was beautiful.
We were the center of our universe.
Love was a power so strong...
I was afraid to die.
I feared death would steal you away.
My soul was entangled,
never to let go.
Our love...
the ruler of all things.
Then it happened;
Your mask that once fit so tight
fell away to reveal...
all things hidden,
all things buried deep,
everything so dark.

The saddest of days,
the broken, feeble ways of deception.
This death of our love?
Was it love?
Nothing could ever explain the hurt I felt, I feel.
Still I love you...
how could I?
You melted away into a sad memory...
of you and me...
You've a new mask now.
It fits so well.
Still my heart dies
in this lonely, dark hell.
a shoestring short
of walking
in someone's shoes.
it takes more than accepting a person to then say that you know how they feel...and suffer.


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United States
Hi and welcome!
I want everyone to know that I DO appreciate any critiques and/or comments on anything I do and if I don't get back to you... THANK YOU for Fav'ing me! or Thanks for the Comment! ....I feel better already.

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hypermagical Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
Thank you for the faves! ^_^
ThePixiesMuse Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for the fave!
TerramArmsXIII Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you for the watch, would you like to read some of what i wrote?
odinify Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
Of course,I just need more time to do it.
However, World In Between Ch 1 was...stunning!
TerramArmsXIII Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer took a long time to make that one
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